Bad poem #10

[gerbie]

Her head on my chest
Her fingers playing with my chest hair
Her feet in between mine
To get them warm

My chin rests on the top of her head
Only one duvet
We don't need more space anyway
My hand on her bare back

I am completely at ease
She doesn't want me
To say these words
yet

but I do love her

Comments

[sandrini.livejournal.com]

It's a nice poem right from the heart ;-)

[gerbie.livejournal.com]

*blush*

mmmmmmmmm

[aquariusmama.livejournal.com]

beautiful.......sigh.

Re: mmmmmmmmm

[gerbie.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

not bad..

[littlegreenfrog.livejournal.com]

beautiful! :)

~lgf

Re: not bad..

[gerbie.livejournal.com]

It is not supposed to be beautiful, it was written for this community called 'bad poetry'. Please no more praise, they might throw me out ;-))

Re: not bad..

[littlegreenfrog.livejournal.com]

okay then..

that's shit mate!

~lgf

Re: not bad..

[gerbie.livejournal.com]

Thanx luv!

[(Anonymous)]

Ik doe wel net alsof ik dit niet gelezen heb...helemaal niet bad trouwens. Vinden meer vrouwen geloof ik!

[gerbie.livejournal.com]

Net doen alsof. Waarom?

Tja, dat alleen dames reageren, is niet mijn schuld.